We were inspired by the amazing swimming sports day. Perfect weather, excited kids, keen competitors, noisy spectators, and organized teachers all mixed together to create a successful action packed Bledisloe School Swimming Sports.
Hi Room 13 I loved reading your swimming stories and really enjoyed the innovative way you published them (if you don't know what that word means you may have to look it up!). I saw them coming off the printer in the office and couldn't help reading them. What great descriptive writing! Mrs Bevis
These are great pieces of descriptive writing. You're really trying hard to put images in the reader's mind. Tino pai Te mahi.
ReplyDeleteHi Room 13
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your swimming stories and really enjoyed the innovative way you published them (if you don't know what that word means you may have to look it up!). I saw them coming off the printer in the office and couldn't help reading them. What great descriptive writing!
Mrs Bevis